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Rahul Shah Posted 11 years ago
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Can someone please point out the inaccuracies of this sentence.

During my Master's of Information Technology I had enrolled for software engineering course and during my final semester I undertook research on Web technologies. My research concentrated on website security.

Currently I have taken a course on IT management. This course has taught me US Principles for IT.

Thanks in advance.
  

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During my Master of Information Technology program, I enrolled in a software engineering course, and during my final semester, I undertook research on web technologies, focussing on website security. Currently I am taking a course in IT management, which is teaching me the American principles of IT.

  • During my Master of Information Technology program, I enrolled in a software engineering course, and during my final semester, I undertook research on web technologies, focussing on website security.
  • Currently I am taking a course in IT management, which is teaching me the American principles of IT.
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During my Master of Information Technology program, I enrolled in a software engineering course, and during my final semester, I undertook research on web technologies, focussing on website security.

Currently I am taking a course in IT management, which is teaching me the American principles of IT.

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