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Oprah Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
What's wrong with this sentence?
This sentence seems awkward to me, but I'm not sure how to revise it.
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
Top answer
You are in possesion of some previous experimental data. "
- You are in possesion of some previous experimental data.
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You are in possesion of some previous experimental data.
So I would write the following:
A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with some/the previous experimental data satisfactorily."
So I would write the following:
A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with some/the previous experimental data satisfactorily."
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OprahThis sentence seems awkward to me, but I'm not sure how to revise it.How about:
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
"A truly three-dimensional
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milky
If the context is known, your words 'is one which' is not a necessity. I maybe wrong.
I assume the context is known here.
If the context is known, your words 'is one which' is not a necessity. I maybe wrong.
I assume the context is known here.
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OprahThis sentence seems awkward to me, but I'm not sure how to revise it.
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with the previous experimental data carefully." maybe.
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
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What about the following:
"A truly three-dimensional case is satisfactorily simulated and compared with previous experimental data."
"A truly three-dimensional case is satisfactorily simulated and compared with previous experimental data."
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Hi,
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
The awkwardness stems from the fact that the impartial, scientific, clinical sound of the passive i
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better.
The awkwardness stems from the fact that the impartial, scientific, clinical sound of the passive i
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AnonymousWhat about the following:This is exactly what I was thinking.
"A truly three-dimensional case is satisfactorily simulated and compared with previous experimental data."
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OprahThis sentence seems awkward to me, but I'm not sure how to revise it.
"A truly three-dimensional case is simulated and compared with previous experimental data satisfactorily."
I think the problem is with the word "satisfactorily." Any idea how to rewrite this so it sounds better."A three-dimensional case is simulated" sounds weird to me. It must b
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I'd like to thank everyone for their suggestions. Let me think this over and come up with something based on your comments/suggestions.
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