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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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whats wrong with this lead sentence?

0The hunt for the world’s intangible terrorist has ended. Leaving peace of mind amongst the American people and to all mankind.02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00The hunt for the world’s intangible terrorist has ended. 02font 02br 02br 00'Intangible' is not a good word to use for a person. 02br 02br 00eg A01i 01u 00 tangible02u 02i 00 asset in a business is a chair or a truck.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00The hunt for the world’s intangible terrorist has ended.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00'Intangible' is not a good word to use for a person.
  • 02br 02br 00eg A01i 01u 00 tangible02u 02i 00 asset in a business is a chair or a truck.
  • 02br 02br 00In addition, 01font 00Leaving peace of mind amongst the American people and to all mankind02font 00 is not a sentence but merely a phrase.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00The hunt for the world’s intangible terrorist has ended. Leaving peace of mind amongst the American people and to all mankind.02font02br
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00'Intangible' is not a good word to use for a person. It suggests 'not solid', not something that can be touched by a human hand.02br
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