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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

What's wrong with the sentence?

Him remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story.
  

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Hi, Him remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story. Stricter grammar is His remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story. Are you sure that you don't want to more simply say this?

  • Hi, Him remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story.
  • Stricter grammar is His remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story.
  • Are you sure that you don't want to more simply say this?
  • His dream foreshadows events much later in the story.
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Hi,

Him remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story.

Stricter grammar is

His remembering the dream foreshadows events much later in the story.

Are you sure that you don't want to more simply say this

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