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Fiercepotatohot Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
what's the right expression for my military job?
I want to write a sentence about my military experience for my job application.
and I want to say something like this...
"I delivered flight identification and schedule information to agents on a conference call."
Actually, in Air Force I worked with more than 12 Air Control agents who worked on attaching symbols on radar plots on computer screen.
Does the sentence sound ok to native speakers?
and I want to say something like this...
"I delivered flight identification and schedule information to agents on a conference call."
Actually, in Air Force I worked with more than 12 Air Control agents who worked on attaching symbols on radar plots on computer screen.
Does the sentence sound ok to native speakers?
Top answer
sung min Lee Actually, I n the Air Force I worked with more than twelve Air Control A gents who worked at attaching symbols to radar plots on computer screen s. I've suggested different prepositions to avoid the over-use of on . They are not necessarily a great improvement on your original, but it's easier to read.
- sung min Lee Actually, I n the Air Force I worked with more than twelve Air Control A gents who worked at attaching symbols to radar plots on computer screen s.
- I've suggested different prepositions to avoid the over-use of on .
- They are not necessarily a great improvement on your original, but it's easier to read.
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sung min LeeActually,In the Air Force I worked with more than twelve Air Control Agents who worked at attaching symbols
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