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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

What's the difference between the 2

Can a native speaker answer this please?

As compared to vs compared to

The lifespan of a person working the graveyard shift over 20 years is considerably diminished as compared to someone who worked 9-5.
The lifespan of a person working the graveyard shift over 20 years is considerably diminished compared to someone who worked 9-5.

Is it phrased correctly please?

Thank you so much
  

Top answer

The second sentence is the right one . But you could exchange the word diminished for the word less , as it will sound smoother if it read ''The lifespan of a person working the graveyard shift over 20 years is considerably less as compared to someone who worked 9-5.

  • The second sentence is the right one .
  • But you could exchange the word diminished for the word less , as it will sound smoother if it read ''The lifespan of a person working the graveyard shift over 20 years is considerably less as compared to someone who worked 9-5.
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The second sentence is the right one.But you could exchange the word diminished for the word less, as it will sound smoother if it read ''The lifespan of a person working the graveyard shift over 20 years is considerably less as compared to someone who worked 9-5.

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