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Samsoner2 Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
What's the best way to combine these sentences into one?
• An eloquent speaker who communicates in a clear, concise and friendly tone.
• Empathizes with customers and actively listens to their requests or questions.
This is for a resume. Thanks!
• Empathizes with customers and actively listens to their requests or questions.
This is for a resume. Thanks!
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Neither of these are sentences. They are what might be called "bullet points," but even bullet points have parallel structures. These do not.
- Neither of these are sentences.
- They are what might be called "bullet points," but even bullet points have parallel structures.
- These do not.
- This is a sentence: I am an eloquent speaker who can not only communicate in a clear, concise and friendly tone but empathize with customers by actively listening to their requests or questions.
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Neither of these are sentences. They are what might be called "bullet points," but even bullet points have parallel structures.
These do not.
This is a sentence:
I am an eloquent speaker who can not only communicate in a clear, concise and friendly tone but empathize with customers by actively listening to their requests or questions.
These do not.
This is a sentence:
I am an eloquent speaker who can not only communicate in a clear, concise and friendly tone but empathize with customers by actively listening to their requests or questions.
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