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What's the beginning of the storm like?
Clouds gathered. The sun dimmed. The sky darkened. The wind blew. Dogs run and growled. Birds cried. The lightning flashed. Thunder sounded. The earth shook and trembled. People screamed and run. Trees fell. The rain came down. The soil soacked. The revers spilt over. A storm had begun.
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I have underlined some problem areas. In addition, there are too many short simple sentences; try to combine some of them into compound and complex sentences. Clouds gathered.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- In addition, there are too many short simple sentences; try to combine some of them into compound and complex sentences.
- Clouds gathered.
- The sun dimmed.
- The sky darkened.
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I have underlined some problem areas. In addition, there are too many short simple sentences; try to combine some of them into compound and complex sentences.
Clouds gathered. The sun dimmed. The sky darkened. The wind blew. Dogs run and growled. Birds cried. The lightning flashed. Thunder sounded. The earth shook and trembled. People screamed and run. Trees f
Clouds gathered. The sun dimmed. The sky darkened. The wind blew. Dogs run and growled. Birds cried. The lightning flashed. Thunder sounded. The earth shook and trembled. People screamed and run. Trees f
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