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Pb03 Posted 17 years ago
Vocabulary
What you see...
Hi guys,
The situation is when you greet a buyer and try to introduce someone.
I'm wondering whether the expressions below are alright or need some change.
Your comments will be a great help for me.
Thanks~!
pb
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A: I'm looking forward to finding out more about your company.
B: We hope you like what you see. Firstly, I'd like to introduce you to our vice president in charge of marketing Mr. Brown.
Q 1: Is it alrigt just to say "what you see" instead of "what you will see"?
Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name. Is it alright? How about these expressions?
A) I'd like to introduce you to our vice president in charge of marketing, Mr. Brown.
B) I'd like to introduce you to Mr. Brown, our vice president in charge of marketing.
C) I'd like to introduce you to our vice president, Mr. Brown who's in charge of marketing.
The situation is when you greet a buyer and try to introduce someone.
I'm wondering whether the expressions below are alright or need some change.
Your comments will be a great help for me.
Thanks~!
pb
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A: I'm looking forward to finding out more about your company.
B: We hope you like what you see. Firstly, I'd like to introduce you to our vice president in charge of marketing Mr. Brown.
Q 1: Is it alrigt just to say "what you see" instead of "what you will see"?
Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name. Is it alright? How about these expressions?
A) I'd like to introduce you to our vice president in charge of marketing, Mr. Brown.
B) I'd like to introduce you to Mr. Brown, our vice president in charge of marketing.
C) I'd like to introduce you to our vice president, Mr. Brown who's in charge of marketing.
Top answer
-- 'What you see' is correct; 'will' is not native. Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name. Is it alright?
- -- 'What you see' is correct; 'will' is not native.
- Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name.
- Is it alright?
- -- A & B are OK .
- C sounds odd– as if there's only one vice-president.
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Q 1: Is it alrigt just to say "what you see" instead of "what you will see"?-- 'What you see' is correct; 'will' is not native.
Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name. Is it alright? How about these expressions?-- A & B are OK. C sounds odd– as if there's only one vice-president. If that is the case, then C
Q2: Second sentence seems a little bit awkward to me with the distance between the title and the name. Is it alright? How about these expressions?-- A & B are OK. C sounds odd– as if there's only one vice-president. If that is the case, then C
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