What would you do if you have free land ? toefl

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I have a lot of plans in regard to the question what I will do with some free land. I think it will depend on how big is the land and also on the location. I always want to have some land behind my house for two reasons. The first one is to farm and cultivate my own vegetables; the second is to build my own fitness center To begin with, I must say the recent advancements in food industry have affected negatively the quality of the food. The food is now empoisoned with antibiotics and modified gene ingredients. There is no doubt that these modifications will affect our health and our immunity system. We need to find an alternative way to avoid eating the genetic modified food. Therefore having a land behind my house will incredibly change my life. I will use this land to cultivate my own vegetables and fruits. I will make sure to not use pesticide or fertilizer. Secondly, in addition to the point mentioned above. I always wanted to have my own gym. I live in a big city where I have always to drive to yoga classes and stay almost an hour in traffic. Furthermore. Some fitness studio offers yoga or Zumba in limited session with high membership fees. I will think it would be very beneficial for me if I will use the free land to build a fitness center. It would be nice if you have your own place where you just need to lay your fitness mat and enjoy your working out. More than you can use all the machines when you feel like and put your own music. In conclusion, having some free land will almost for sure improve my life styles and make me feel better. Cultivating organic food and building my own fitness center will be a good investment for the free land