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Lordskorpz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

What would you change in my sentences?

Today, I received a formal invitation to Buckingham Palace. For so long, I have wanted to visit Buckingham Palace. I am fascinated by the Royals, historical architecture and British tradition.---- (I have chosen to use lines to separate my sentences, because I don't know how to input line breaks on this site)---Last night I went to the shop to pick up some last minute groceries. When I arrived a group of teenagers were stood outside of the main entrance. I decided to go home and pick up the groceries in the morning instead, because I was afraid I might have been mugged or assaulted by them.
  

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Using dashes with no spaces creates HTML code for strike-through. Today, I received a formal invitation to Buckingham Palace. For so long, I have wanted to visit Buckingham Palace.

  • Using dashes with no spaces creates HTML code for strike-through.
  • Today, I received a formal invitation to Buckingham Palace.
  • For so long, I have wanted to visit Buckingham Palace.
  • I am fascinated by the royals, historical architecture and British tradition.
  • Last night I went to the shop to pick up some last-minute groceries.
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Using dashes with no spaces creates HTML code for strike-through.

Today, I received a formal invitation to Buckingham Palace. For so long, I have wanted to visit Buckingham Palace. I am fascinated by the royals, historical architecture and British tradition.

Last night I went to the shop to pick up some last-minute groceries. When I arrived, a group of teenagers were stan

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