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What word should I use in this sentence?
I have highlighted the words of and from in bold.
"It is optimistic that the recent price changes will benefit new and existing customers of CompanyXYZ"
"It is optimistic that new and existing customers from CompanyXYZ will benefit from the recent price changes."
Then I decided to write it like this, which sounds somewhat better.
"It is optimistic that CompanyXYZ's new and existing customers will benefit from the recent price changes."
"It is optimistic that the recent price changes will benefit new and existing customers of CompanyXYZ"
"It is optimistic that new and existing customers from CompanyXYZ will benefit from the recent price changes."
Then I decided to write it like this, which sounds somewhat better.
"It is optimistic that CompanyXYZ's new and existing customers will benefit from the recent price changes."
Top answer
Of the first two, use of . However, your own is better than either of the other two.
- Of the first two, use of .
- However, your own is better than either of the other two.
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Of the first two, use of. However, your own is better than either of the other two.
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Don't say CompanyXYZ, just say XYZ.
It is optimistic that does not sound quite right. Do you mean eg It is hoped that ?
It is optimistic that does not sound quite right. Do you mean eg It is hoped that ?
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