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Thiều Lê Cẩm Linh Posted 8 years ago
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What will the world look like in 2030?

What will the world look like in 2030?
Our world has experienced 3 revolution, that is: the revolution of energy use water and steam to mechanization of production; the revolution of using electrical energy to create large-scale production background; the revolution of using electronic and information technology to automate the production and now we are witnessing the development of the fourth industrial revolution. That's the revolution based on highly integrated platform of the system connects the Chemistry-Physics-biology, create the structure and the operation of the new production platform based on high-technology applications, network internet of things , artificial intelligence. With the pace of development as rapidly in the era of the industrial revolution the current 4.0 is not hard to put out more wild theory questions the world will be like in the year 2060. But I always think the world in 2060 will be a flat world, a world without distance of science, engineering, technology, civilization; location of ..., the world is only small right by the computer and also so flat!
Along with the level of influence, the spread of the Industrial Revolution 4.0 takes place across all countries and territories of the world, on all sides and every side of social life, at a faster pace than what happened from Prior to the present and forecasts of this network will alter the entire system of production and governance worldwide, leading to globalization that are faster, stronger. Neither of these processes increases with strong impacts on each other's influence, interdependence of all areas of the nation, the peoples of the world; the border between countries will narrow down, people we can easily connect to millions of people but lose the connection with ourselves. Thus, the poor nations have the advantage of the development of the science of engineering, and to acquire advanced scientific achievements of humanity in order to cater to the development of their country. For example, poor countries in Africa can adopt Israeli technology in the production of clean agriculture, organic agriculture,... The gap between the real world and the virtual world is being wiped out through advanced technologies, innovation, creative incessant. Thus, the robot will perform human and commerce activities that occupy a small part in business or as humans will use solar, gas and wind sources to produce alternative electricity sources of thermal power , nuclear power and hydroelectric power.
The world's flat in 2030 is back to human life the advances and comfort, challenging the challenge that it poses also is not small, causing the scientists to headache and give a warning as the natural resource will be exploited , the contaminated habitat; The warming of the earth, growing climate change leads to intense and very erratic storms, drought, dry salty, and a Miss Sea..., more and more; The ozone layer is at risk of puncture making the creatures on the Earth in danger and may be dead, worn. Not only that, the more terrifying the civil War, the war between religions, the nation and the destruction of the biotechnology wars is latent many risks – all of which will be destroyed in the area off only with the button pressed.
In short, science, technology is growing in strong and we are driven to a world of good, modern, more energetic energy than in 2030 but besides a lot of risk and challenges that are in front. Therefore, each person has a share of his/her strength to protect the natural land, water, air...... with a green environment for our common home.

  

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Your sentences are not grammatical English and you use many unnatural phrases. " The "real world" is the environment in which we live; a "virtual world" is a simulated, imaginary space created by a computer program. I have highlighted some of the problems.

  • Your sentences are not grammatical English and you use many unnatural phrases.
  • " The "real world" is the environment in which we live; a "virtual world" is a simulated, imaginary space created by a computer program.
  • I have highlighted some of the problems.
  • I suggest that you write shorter sentences, and put more thought into your essays.
  • You need to organize paragraphs better.
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Your sentences are not grammatical English and you use many unnatural phrases.

A lot of your text makes no sense at all and some is scientifically incorrect, such as the existence of a flat world and narrowing the gap between the "real world" and the "virtual world." The "real world" is the environment in which we live; a "virtual world" is a simulated, imaginary space created by a comp

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