What we need today is not communication but social networking skills.

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HiPlease point out the mistakes in this essayCommunication is one of the most important features, which separates human beings from other living beings. In the ancient days human beings communicated with each other using signs and symbols. Then came the time when they started communicating using different languages. As science and technology made steady progress more and more advanced communication gadgets were invented. Telephone which connected people living far away from each other, was a milestone in the field of communication technology. In the series of highly advanced modes of communication, today we have social networking where with the help of internet, one can communicate with a large of number of people at the same time. As the need for social skills and effective mass communication is growing day by day the importance of social networking skills is increasing at a great pace. Social networking skills is highly useful to disseminate information and facts to a large number of people who are directly or indirectly benefitted by that. Though there are visual and print media to do this work, information is disseminated easily through social media as, in seconds, the information reaches a large number of people who are living in different parts of the world. This is not possible with visual and print media as their reach is limited by space and time. This is highly helpful to teachers, doctors, law enforcement authorities and others to reach a large section of the target population. Social networking is proving to be very helpful to those who want to mobilize support for any good cause. It has been found that many state and national level associations are able to spread their new welfare schemes for the citizens in the social media. Social networking sites come with various added features to help people who are working for child development, poverty eradication and other social problems, to garner support of the people for their various programmes. Today we need to be effective communicators in whichever position we hold. In addition we need to be able to connect to people related to our work who are living in different parts of the world. Social networking is becoming a platform where we are able to learn many highly important and useful things from the posts of our friends and relatives others in different parts of the world. Also, social networking gives us the opportunities to demonstrate our skills to a large of people and get their opinions and suggestions about them. Thus, the importance of social networking skills can never be overstated today when our reputation is measured by our popular we are in the social media.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

vsureshPlease point out the mistakes in this essay

I've underlined some:

Communication is one of the most important features, which separates human beings from other living beings (This opening statement is wrong; virtually all animals and even plants communicate). In the ancient days human beings communicated with each other using signs and symbols. (This statement is also wrong; spoken language preceded symbolization.) Then came the time when they started communicating using different languages. As science and technology made steady progress more and more advanced communication gadgets were invented. Telephone which connected people living far away from each other, was a milestone in the field of communication technology. In the series of highly advanced modes of communication, today we have social networking where with the help of internet, one can communicate with a large of number of people at the same time. As the need for social skills and effective mass communication is growing day by day the importance of social networking skills is increasing at a great pace.

Social networking skills is highly useful to disseminate information and facts to a large number of people who are directly or indirectly benefitted by that. Though there are visual and print media to do this work, information is disseminated easily through social media as, in seconds, the information reaches a large number of people who are living in different parts of the world. This is not possible with visual and print media as their reach is limited by space and time. This is highly helpful to teachers, doctors, law enforcement authorities and others to reach a large section of the target population.

Social networking is proving to be very helpful to those who want to mobilize support for any good cause. It has been found that many state and national level associations are able to spread their new welfare schemes for the citizens in the social media. Social networking sites come with various added features to help people who are working for child development, poverty eradication and other social problems, to garner support of the people for their various programmes.

Today we need to be effective communicators in whichever position we hold. In addition we need to be able to connect to people related to our work who are living in different parts of the world. Social networking is becoming a platform where we are able to learn many highly important and useful things from the posts of our friends and relatives others in different parts of the world. Also, social networking gives us the opportunities to demonstrate our skills to a large of people and get their opinions and suggestions about them.

Thus, the importance of social networking skills can never be overstated today when our reputation is measured by our popular we are in the social media.

Vsuresh · Answer

Sir
Thank you very much for pointing out the mistakes.

I have made the changes. Please tell me if they are correct.

Communication using words is one of the most important features that separate human beings from other living beings. During the ancient days human beings communicated with each other using signs. Later, they started communicating using different languages. As science and technology made steady progress, more and more advanced communication devices were invented. Telephone, which connected people living far away from each other, was a milestone in the field of communication technology. In a series of highly advanced modes of communication, today we have social networking which enables us to communicate with a large of number of people at the same time with the help of Internet,. As the need for social skills and effective mass communication is growing day by day, the importance of social networking skills is increasing at a great pace.

Social networking skills is highly useful to disseminate a lot of valuable information to those who are directly or indirectly benefited by them. Although there are visual and print media to do this work, information is disseminated easily through social media as, in seconds, the information reaches people who live in different parts of the world. This is not possible with visual and print media, as their reach is limited by space and time. This is highly helpful to teachers, doctors, law enforcement authorities and others to reach the target population.

Social networking is proving to be very helpful to those who want to mobilize support for any good cause. It has been found that many state and national level associations are able to spread their new welfare schemes for the citizens in the social media. Social networking sites come with various added features to help people who are working for child development, poverty eradication and other social problems to garner support of the people for their various programmes.

Today we need to be effective communicators in whichever position we hold. In addition we need to be able to connect to people related to our work. Social networking is becoming a platform where we are able to learn many highly important and useful things from the posts of our friends, relatives and others . Also, social networking gives us the opportunities to demonstrate our skills to a large of people and get their opinions and suggestions about them.

Thus, the importance of social networking skills can never be overstated today when our reputation is measured by how popular we are in the social media.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Much better! Here are a few more corrections:

Communication using words is one of the most important features that separate human beings from other living beings. Early human beings communicated with each other using signs. Later, they started communicating using language. As science and technology made steady progress, more and more advanced communication devices were invented. The telephone, which connected people living far away from each other, was a milestone in the field of communication technology. Among our highly advanced modes of communication today, we have social networking, which enables us to communicate with many people at the same time via the Internet,. As the need for social skills and effective mass communication is growing day by day, the importance of social networking skills is increasing at a great pace.

Social networking skills are highly useful to disseminate information to those who are directly or indirectly benefited. Although there are visual and print media to do this work, information is disseminated easily through social media as, in seconds, the information reaches people in different parts of the world. This is not possible with visual and print media, as their reach is limited by space and time. This is highly helpful to teachers, doctors, law enforcement authorities and others to reach the target population.

Social networking is proving to be very helpful to those who want to mobilize support for a good cause. Many state and national associations are able to spread their new welfare schemes for their citizens in the social media. Social networking sites come with various added features to help people who are working for child development, poverty eradication and other social problems to garner support of the people for their various programmes.

Today we need to be effective communicators in whichever position we hold. In addition, we need to be able to connect to people related to our work. Social networking is becoming a platform where we are able to learn much from the posts of our friends, relatives and others . Also, social networking gives us the opportunity to demonstrate our skills to others and get their opinions and suggestions about them.

Thus, the importance of social networking skills can never be overstated today when our reputation is measured by how popular we are in the social media.

Vsuresh · Answer

Thank you very much,sir.

Anonymous · Answer

vsureshDuring the ancient days

This is awkward. In ancient times, is more natural.

Vsuresh · Answer

Thank you, Anon.

What we need today is not communication but social networking skills.

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