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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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What sounds best?

Hi, I'm attempting to write a script.

On the way to her car, she drops the cigarette on the ground.

Heading for her car, she drops the cigarette on the ground.

Which one sounds best?

Thanks.

  

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I don't think one is better than the other, but I would pick the first one. It seems more script-like.

  • I don't think one is better than the other, but I would pick the first one.
  • It seems more script-like.
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I don't think one is better than the other, but I would pick the first one. It seems more script-like.

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