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Too finicky 7 Posted 6 years ago
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What one may find

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Context- Talking about a person here.

What one may find attractive, others may not find as much attractive as one/you did.

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What one may find someone attractive, others may not find that someone as much attractive as one/you did.

  

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too finicky 7 What one may find attractive, others may not find as much attractive as one/you did. The use of 'one' is very formal, and it doesn't mix well with 'you'. I would use 'you' throughout.

  • too finicky 7 What one may find attractive, others may not find as much attractive as one/you did.
  • The use of 'one' is very formal, and it doesn't mix well with 'you'.
  • I would use 'you' throughout.
  • What you may find attractive, others may not find as attractive (as you do).
  • 'as you do' is optional.
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too finicky 7What one may find attractive, others may not find as much attractive as one/you did.

The use of 'one' is very formal, and it doesn't mix well with 'you'. I would use 'you' throughout.

What you may find attractive, others may not find as attractive (as you do).

'as you do' is optional. I would omit it.

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