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What makes you want to do this workshop?

Can you help me proofread the answer for this question;: What makes you want to do this workshop?

It is mandatory for tutors to hold a workshop because we get paid by the tutoring center. So we chose to do a math workshop.

  

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It's a bit awkward. Here is a more natural answer. We want to do this because our employer, the tutoring center, requires us to hold a workshop as a condition of employment.

  • It's a bit awkward.
  • Here is a more natural answer.
  • We want to do this because our employer, the tutoring center, requires us to hold a workshop as a condition of employment.
  • So we chose to do a math workshop.
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It's a bit awkward.

Here is a more natural answer.

We want to do this because our employer, the tutoring center, requires us to hold a workshop as a condition of employment. So we chose to do a math workshop.

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