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0 So, tired of watching the constant drizzle that was all there was to see outside, he gets up from the window seat to go wander around and take stock of what he has here in this classy, upscale hotel room. 02 br
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0 My suggestion is 02 br 02 br 00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH was all there was to see outside, he GOT up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he HAD THER in HIS classy, upscale hotel room. " 02 br 02 br 00 I think you've mixed present and past tense. If your intention is for the sentence to be present tense I would change to 02 br 02 br 00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH IS all there IS to see outside, he gets up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he has here in this classy, upscale hotel room.
- 0 My suggestion is 02 br 02 br 00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH was all there was to see outside, he GOT up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he HAD THER in HIS classy, upscale hotel room.
- " 02 br 02 br 00 I think you've mixed present and past tense.
- If your intention is for the sentence to be present tense I would change to 02 br 02 br 00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH IS all there IS to see outside, he gets up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he has here in this classy, upscale hotel room.
- wander is sufficient as the verb in this sentence).
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0 My suggestion is 02 br
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00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH was all there was to see outside, he GOT up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he HAD THER in HIS classy, upscale hotel room. " 02 br
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00 I think you've mixed present and past tense. If your intention is for the sentence to be present tense I would
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00 "So, tired of watching the constant drizzle WHICH was all there was to see outside, he GOT up from the window seat to wander around and take stock of what he HAD THER in HIS classy, upscale hotel room. " 02 br
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00 I think you've mixed present and past tense. If your intention is for the sentence to be present tense I would
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