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I was given English assignments correcting the mistakes ,I am confused with some sentences here
Could you help me?
1. Parents impose authorities for their children's success.
2. The true is the technology let people become a dependent computer;people can not live normal life again with-oout these high-tech interactions.
Can I change this sentence like this:The true is technology let people become a dependent on computer;people can not live normal life again without these high-tech interactions.
3. No one thinks about what good is and what evil is
4.Despite the facts that technology is convenient and saves time,it also gives the opportunity for people to find assistants on-line,both mentally and academically.
5. Nothing wrong is seen in this cause,it is a noble cause

Caroline · Accepted Answer

Let me try to help you out

1. Parents impose their authority for their children's success.

2. The truth is that technology lets people become dependent on computers; people cannot live a normal life again without these high-tech facilities / without the convenience of high-tech gadgets.

3. No one thinks about what good and evil are. (this sounds better but your sentence is correct.)

4. In addition to being convenient and time-saving, technology also provides the opportunity for people to find assistance online, both psychologically and academically.

5. This sentence is correct but sounds a bit redundant.. If you mention that the cause is noble then the first bit of the sentence is automatically included in the meaning.

Jessamine_tea · Answer

thank you so much,Caroline.

Caroline · Answer

my pleasure Jess<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/> Where are you from & for how long have you been learning English?

Jessamine_tea · Answer

I have learned English for 4 or 5 years,well,that time is not enough for me to understand all of the rules in English. It's so difficult.

Caroline · Answer

I'm sure that if you practice you'll  understand them soon enough<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/>  Good luck with that!!

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