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Mohamed Elshawaf Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

What is the wrong with this sentence?

I write it in MS word and its auto grammar check shows an error: fragment (consider revising):
Reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets.
  

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There is no verb. My interests include reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets. Reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets are all topics mentioned in her book.

  • There is no verb.
  • My interests include reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets.
  • Reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets are all topics mentioned in her book.
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There is no verb.
My interests include reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets.
Reading, writing, classical music, technology and gadgets are all topics mentioned in her book.
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But I wrote it under Interests heading, should I mention the verb, I mean I want it to be as a list.
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As a list, it's fine. As a normal sentence, it would be a fragment, which is why Word flagged it.

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