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Jazzmaster Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

What is the SUBJECT of this sentence?

If I wrote a sentence:

One of the masterworks of Leo Fender, the well-known and admired founder of Fender Musical Instruments Company, the Stratocaster, an electric guitar born in 1954, which employs the detachable-neck construction,
contoured body, a tremolo arm and three single-coil pick ups, is a rock music icon.

Question:
In the proper English grammar, is the entire "One of the masterworks of Leo Fender, the well-known and admired founder of Fender Musical Instruments Company, the Stratocaster, is an electric guitar born in 1954, which employs the detachable-neck construction, contoured body, a tremolo arm and three single-coil pick ups" considered the subject of this sentence?

Or could I say only "the Stratocaster" is the subject of this sentence, because all other phrases are, directly or indirectly, just describing "the Stratocaster"?

Or something else?

Thanks for your input.
  

Top answer

I would suggest, if you want stratocaster to obviously be the subject of the sentence, that you begin the sentence with it. This is an example of what I refer to as "too much sentence". It would read much more smoothly if it were divided into two sentences.

  • I would suggest, if you want stratocaster to obviously be the subject of the sentence, that you begin the sentence with it.
  • This is an example of what I refer to as "too much sentence".
  • It would read much more smoothly if it were divided into two sentences.
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I would suggest, if you want stratocaster to obviously be the subject of the sentence, that you begin the sentence with it. This is an example of what I refer to as "too much sentence". It would read much more smoothly if it were divided into two sentences.
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PhilipI would suggest, if you want stratocaster to obviously be the subject of the sentence, that you begin the sentence with it. This is an example of what I refer to as "too much sentence". It would read much more smoothly if it were divided into two sentences.

Thanks for your reply.

I hear you. You are absolutely right. This sen
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Hi,

Generally speaking, I'd consider the whole thing the grammatical subject.
But you could argue that the 'deep' or 'real' subject is the stratocaster.

Best wishes, Clive.
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CliveHi,

Generally speaking, I'd consider the whole thing the grammatical subject.
But you could argue that the 'deep' or 'real' subject is the stratocaster.

Best wishes, Clive.

Thanks Clive.
Your profile picture looks like mine or vice versa. Anyway, I like it.

The whole thing is considered as the grammatical subje
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When I was in grammar school, shortly before the birth of the subject instrument, we would have said the subject is "one." Matter of fact, I still think it is. - A.

Edit. One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, the seventh, has an interesting structural feature.

One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, an interesting use of sonata form, is the seventh.

Clive, acc
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I would have said the simple subject is "one". The "full subject" is everything except the last "is a rock music icon", which is the predicate.
CJ
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Hi,
Edit. One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, the seventh, has an interesting structural feature.

One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, an interesting use of sonata form, is the seventh.

Clive, according to your definition, the real subject of my first example would be "the seventh," Yes. Or perhaps 'Beethoven's Seventh Symphony'.

and the real subject of m
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Many thanks, Clive. You told me exactly what I wanted to know. It temporarily threw me, as I had never heard of the concept. I was anticipating great conflicts between the grammatical and the linguistic. - A.
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AvangiWhen I was in grammar school, shortly before the birth of the subject instrument, we would have said the subject is "one." Matter of fact, I still think it is. - A.

Edit. One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, the seventh, has an interesting structural feature.

One of my favorite Beethoven symphonies, an interesting use of sonata form, is th
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CalifJim I would have said the simple subject is "one". The "full subject" is everything except the last "is a rock music icon", which is the predicate.
CJ

Thanks CJ.
Another vote for "one". Hmm, this is beginning to make a lot of sense. Yea, "full subject" should refer to the everything. "is a rock music icon" is supposed to be the ma

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