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TASK 1

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs illustrate the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010

It is clear from the charts that the lines of the total were stably higher than the information of commencing. While the figures of the commencing fluctuated in this period.

In the chart of overseas students, the line of the total increased sharply from 20000 to 80000 over a ten year period, while the graph of the commencing only rose slightly from below 20000 to 40000. Although over ten years, the chart of the commencing remained below 45000.

In local students, the graph of the total jumped dramatically over 20000, from 40000 to over 60000 over a ten year period. But the line of the commencing fluctuated slightly and remained at 20000 from the year of 2001 to 2010.

Therefore, the graphs of the total were always higher than the graphs of commencing over a decade period.

TASK 2

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Around the world, it has a large number of international events, such as concerts, sports, or traditional foods. But the international sports event is the most popular in the world. So, some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, whereas many people consider it is unhelpful.

To begin, the international sports event has a lot of benefits for all countries around the world. The hosting will help this country have great cooperation with other countries easily. And if the country is elected a hosting an international sports event, all athletes of this country will be played in their hometown. Especially, they will have more good and stable psychology than other teams.

On the other hand, the international event has many inconvenient problems for the hosting. Such as the government always must keep safe to all players from a lot of countries. Absolutely, the event does not have any accidents for players. Secondly, some athletes of the hosting will be had a strong mentality by the pressures of all audiences at the stadium or viewers watching on TV. Because citizens in there always hope their teams advance deep, so that it becomes to be the pressure for all players.

Thereby, hosting an international sports event has a large number of benefits, on the other hand, it has many bad advantages. But in fact, I think that hosting an international sports event has more profitable values than bad advantages because I really enjoy watching all matches which have my nation.