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Pilita Posted 21 years ago
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What is the right way to say this sentence?
0 During this semester, one the most valuable experiences that I had was the opportunity to attend the Southern California Puente Conference at UCLA. 02 br
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00 One the most valuable experiences that I had during this semester was the opportunity to attend the Southern California Puente Conference at UCLA. 0-
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00 One the most valuable experiences that I had during this semester was the opportunity to attend the Southern California Puente Conference at UCLA. 0-
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0 I like the second one much better. Pilita, though both are OK. ) 0-
- 0 I like the second one much better.
- Pilita, though both are OK.
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0 I like the second one much better. Pilita, though both are OK. You could make it a little less wordy and more clear, though: 02 br
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00 'One of the most valuable experiences I had this semester was attending the Southern California Puente Conference at UCLA.' 02 br
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00 (Strictly, the valuable experience wasn't the 'opportunity', was it?-- it was 'att
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00 'One of the most valuable experiences I had this semester was attending the Southern California Puente Conference at UCLA.' 02 br
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00 (Strictly, the valuable experience wasn't the 'opportunity', was it?-- it was 'att
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