What is the proper way to write this sentence?
What is the proper way to write this sentence?
"Around age eight, I participated in art classes at a local church which inspired an interest in art AT a young age."
OR
"Around age eight, I participated in art classes at a local church which inspired an interest in art FROM a young age."
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You have too much that is unnecessary in both. At age eight, I participated in art classes at church, which inspired my interest in art.
- You have too much that is unnecessary in both.
- At age eight, I participated in art classes at church, which inspired my interest in art.
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You have too much that is unnecessary in both.
At age eight, I participated in art classes at church, which inspired my interest in art.
0remmingtonPlease feel free to provide other feedback. This is for a job résumé.
How relevant is your experience as an eight-year-old to your present qualifications for a job?
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