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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

What is the correct way to word this centance?

Hi guys,

I'm writting a mail-shot for work, and I can't seem to get the end quite right, please help!

At first I wrote:

For further information or to arrange a quotation or works please contact our service and maintenance department on 00000 000000 or Email Removed">Email Removed

I realsied that was wrong right away but we can't quite seem to fix it! We've had the following suggestions:

For further information, to arrange a quotation or works please contact our service and maintenance department on 00000 000000 or Email Removed">Email Removed

For further information or to arrange a quotation / works please contact our service and maintenance department on 00000 000000 or Email Removed">Email Removed

For any further information, including to arrange a quotation or works please contact our service and maintenance department on 00000 000000 or Email Removed">Email Removed

none of them seem, to me, to read correctly - can some ome please tell me how this hsould be worded.

Thank you in advance Emotion: smile
  

Top answer

Hi, I don't understand what you mean by 'works'. You need to say this part some other way. Clive

  • Hi, I don't understand what you mean by 'works'.
  • You need to say this part some other way.
  • Clive
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2 Answers
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Hi,



I don't understand what you mean by 'works'. You need to say this part some other way.



Clive
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I might suggest this:

For further information, to receive a quotation, or to set up a work order, please contact our Service and Maintenance Department on 00 00 ....

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