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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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What is the correct punctuation for this sentence?

Or, would it be better to break it up?

With each new discovery emerging; she wavers, trying to decide which path destiny intends for her; and he becomes more certain this is their lifetime to reunite, pressuring her to abandon everything she fought to keep.
  

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Hi, With each new discovery emerging; she wavers, trying to decide which path destiny intends for her; and he becomes more certain this is their lifetime to reunite, pressuring her to abandon everything she fought to keep. You could break it up, or just punctuate with commas. I recommend that you review the use of semi-colons, focusing on when to use them.

  • Hi, With each new discovery emerging; she wavers, trying to decide which path destiny intends for her; and he becomes more certain this is their lifetime to reunite, pressuring her to abandon everything she fought to keep.
  • You could break it up, or just punctuate with commas.
  • I recommend that you review the use of semi-colons, focusing on when to use them.
  • Also, please remember that they are used infrequently.
  • If you see a lot of semi-colons in your writing, you are using them incorrectly.
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Hi,

With each new discovery emerging; she wavers, trying to decide which path destiny intends for her; and he becomes more certain this is their lifetime to reunite, pressuring her to abandon everything she fought to keep.


You could break it up, or just punctuate with commas. I recommend that you review the use of sem

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