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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

What is the correct form of this sentence

I am trying to draft a letter thanking a business partner who spent time with me. The sentence suggested to me was

" We are appreciating your spending time with us to get to know [my company name] and the opportunities within our company. "

I think the above sentence is wrong and I shoud replace it with following sentence

" We appreciate the time you spent with us to get to know [my company name] and the opportunities within our company."

Can you please suggest if my change is good or any better forms to convey this meaning?
  

Top answer

" - is grammatically acceptable. But is it what you really want to say? e.

— JohnParis

  • " - is grammatically acceptable.
  • But is it what you really want to say?
  • e.
  • a potential client) ?
  • If this is the case the sentence above should be worded differently.
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" We appreciate the time you spent with us to get to know [my company name] and the opportunities within our company." - is grammatically acceptable. But is it what you really want to say?

You say that you are writing to a "business partner" - but are you writing to a potential business partner (i.e. a potential client) ? If this is the case the sentence above should be word
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The changes you have done are all right.
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anil was the of the two brothers [old]
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Hi,

Anil was the older of the two brothers.

Clive
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Based on what is written here, I would reword it to something like this:

We appreaciate your time visiting XYZ and your interest in exploring business opportunities with our company....
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