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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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what is incorrect in those sentences:

1) In this paragraph I will argue that the book The Hunger Games is more of an adult book than a teenager's book

2) After the thief who stole my credit card was apprehended by the police, the visa company retroactively reimbursed the charges.

3) Those differences caused racism and inequality in different countries around the world. For example, Brazil a country in which the black people faced and still face racism and discrimination either by the government, the institutions, the educational system, the media or even the people

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I have underlined some problem areas: 1) In this paragraph I will argue that the book The Hunger Games is more of an adult book than a teenager's book 2) After the thief who stole my credit card was apprehended by the police, the visa company retroactively reimbursed the charges. 3) Those differences caused racism and inequality in different countries around the world. For example, Brazil a country in which the black people faced and still face racism and discrimination either by the government, the institutions, the educational system, the media or even the people

  • I have underlined some problem areas: 1) In this paragraph I will argue that the book The Hunger Games is more of an adult book than a teenager's book 2) After the thief who stole my credit card was apprehended by the police, the visa company retroactively reimbursed the charges.
  • 3) Those differences caused racism and inequality in different countries around the world.
  • For example, Brazil a country in which the black people faced and still face racism and discrimination either by the government, the institutions, the educational system, the media or even the people
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I have underlined some problem areas:

1) In this paragraph I will argue that the book The Hunger Games is more of an adult book than a teenager's book

2) After the thief who stole my credit card was apprehended by the police, the visa company retroactively reimbursed the charges.

3) Those differences caused racism and inequality in differen

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