Intimacy, love, and marriage are three different, if interrelated, subjects. The grammar seems fine.
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AnonymousThe two things "three different" and "interrelated" are opposite in meaning so maybe they should be connected by a "but" or an "although.You may also use those, but there is no problem with 'if'. It is quite natural.