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Raia Posted 14 years ago
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What is better: colon, comma or "which is"
I am writing release notes to a software. Here are 4 almost identical sentences:
1.Now the client comes in two forms, with built-in ssh tunneling and without it.
2.Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in ssh tunneling and without it.
3.Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in ssh tunneling and the version without it.
4.Now the client is built automatically with and without built-in ssh tunneling.
Questions:
Am I right that technically all of them are correct? What puntuation marks should I use in given example?
Thank you!
1.Now the client comes in two forms, with built-in ssh tunneling and without it.
2.Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in ssh tunneling and without it.
3.Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in ssh tunneling and the version without it.
4.Now the client is built automatically with and without built-in ssh tunneling.
Questions:
Am I right that technically all of them are correct? What puntuation marks should I use in given example?
Thank you!
Top answer
Now the client comes in two forms, with built-in SSH tunneling and without it. Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in SSH tunneling and without it. Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in SSH tunneling and the version without it.
- Now the client comes in two forms, with built-in SSH tunneling and without it.
- Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in SSH tunneling and without it.
- Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in SSH tunneling and the version without it.
- Now the client is built automatically with and without built-in SSH tunneling.
- Yes, they are all correct, and you may use any of them.
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1.Now the client comes in two forms, with built-in SSH tunneling and without it.
2.Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in SSH tunneling and without it.
3.Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in SSH tunneling and the version without it.
4.Now the client is built automatically with and without built-in
2.Now the client comes in two forms: with built-in SSH tunneling and without it.
3.Now the client comes in two forms, which are the version with built-in SSH tunneling and the version without it.
4.Now the client is built automatically with and without built-in
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