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Zazzex Posted 17 years ago
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What I believe I can devote myself to to leave an ever memorable trace in the history is through becoming an automobile designer, the only dream of mine.

Hello,

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Is the following correct? It looks correct, but weird though.

"What I believe I can devote myself to to leave an ever memorable trace in the history is through becoming an automobile designer, the only dream of mine. "



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I think it would be correct if you put a comma in the to-to thing, but still hard to read. Maye something like an if-then set up. "

  • I think it would be correct if you put a comma in the to-to thing, but still hard to read.
  • Maye something like an if-then set up.
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I think it would be correct if you put a comma in the to-to thing, but still hard to read.
Maye something like an if-then set up. "I believe that if I devote myself to becoming an automobile designer, then..."
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zazzex"What I believe I can devote myself to to leave an ever memorable trace in the history is through becoming an automobile designer, the only dream of mine. "
Wrong. Plain wrong. The sentence was probably written by someone whose native language isn't English.

It starts out fine: What I believe I can devote myself to...
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