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Essay & Composition Writing
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( written comment on students' essays)
1. I can't follow you . I am not sure what you are talking about.
2. Don't make your paper clutter by adding useless words.
3. It sounds awkward. Rewrite thie sentence so that your reader can understand you.
4. This argument is not convincing. Think of another way to support your ideas
5. This part lacks focus. Keep your focus. Don't shift your focus.
( written comment on students' essays)
1. I can't follow you . I am not sure what you are talking about.
2. Don't make your paper clutter by adding useless words.
3. It sounds awkward. Rewrite thie sentence so that your reader can understand you.
4. This argument is not convincing. Think of another way to support your ideas
5. This part lacks focus. Keep your focus. Don't shift your focus.
Top answer
Hi, 1. I can't follow you . I am not sure what you are talking about.
- Hi, 1.
- I can't follow you .
- I am not sure what you are talking about.
- 2.
- Don't make your paper clutter by adding useless words.
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Hi,
1. I can't follow you . I am not sure what you are talking about.
2. Don't make your paper clutter by adding useless words.
Don't clutter your paper with unnecessary words. (I'm not sure what you mean by 'useless words')
3. It sounds awkward. Rewrite thie sentence so that your reader can understand you.
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1. I can't follow you . I am not sure what you are talking about.
2. Don't make your paper clutter by adding useless words.
Don't clutter your paper with unnecessary words. (I'm not sure what you mean by 'useless words')
3. It sounds awkward. Rewrite thie sentence so that your reader can understand you.
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