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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

What grammar parts are they?

Please tell me what grammar part they are. Two separate sentences

You start to fall asleep in the tents, pitched on the snow-covered ice, then wake up, heart racing and gasping for air as your body's autonomic nervous system tries to figure out why it isn't getting enough oxygen.

There is no time for boyfriends, my career comes first.
  

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heart racing and gasping for air as your body's autonomic nervous system tries to figure out why it isn't getting enough oxygen. -- This is a nonfinite (participial) clause acting as a sentence adverbial. -- As it stood, this was a comma-splice sentence (a structural no-no), but I have fixed it by replacing the comma with a semicolon.

  • heart racing and gasping for air as your body's autonomic nervous system tries to figure out why it isn't getting enough oxygen.
  • -- This is a nonfinite (participial) clause acting as a sentence adverbial.
  • -- As it stood, this was a comma-splice sentence (a structural no-no), but I have fixed it by replacing the comma with a semicolon.
  • We now have two independent clauses.
  • Does that help?
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heart racing and gasping for air as your body's autonomic nervous system tries to figure out why it isn't getting enough oxygen. -- This is a nonfinite (participial) clause acting as a sentence adverbial.

There is no time for boyfriends; my career comes first.-- As it stood, this was a comma-splice sentence (a structural no-no), but I have fixed it by replacing the
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Yes, Mr. M. It helps a lot.

It kind of engendered some inquiries, though.

1. In your interview in the English-test.net website, you said:

From there, it didn't take much thought to realize that I could eliminate the middle man and start my own school, lucrative enough to make Japan a good place to stay.

What is this part grammatically?

2. In the
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1-- It looks like an adjective phrase-- or a very truncated adjective clause (no S and no V): my own school, [which would be] lucrative enough....

2-- The trouble is that the heart is racing, but something else (probably the person) is gasping for air. I would just write it off as a sentence adverbial without opening a further can of worms. You sta

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