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Araselvan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

What does this sentence mean and how can we simplify this?

The sponsor wanted to better manage the scope while also improving communication to the business, quality of the deliverables and the teamwork.
  

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I don't know precisely what he means by 'manage the scope of the business'. Please supply more details.

  • I don't know precisely what he means by 'manage the scope of the business'.
  • Please supply more details.
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I don't know precisely what he means by 'manage the scope of the business'. Please supply more details.
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Following is the sentence, I need help with to simplify.

The sponsor wanted to better manage the scope of the project while also improving communication to the business, quality of the deliverables and the teamwork.
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We can't simplify it if we don't know exactly what it means. Try answering Mr M's question rather than just repeating your request.
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Based on the context following is the content of the sentence.

The sponsor wanted better visibity on the scope of the project. He wanted to improve the communication with the business users, quality of the deliverables. He also wanted to improve teamwork(in other words, team members to work together).

Is it possible to reword to make it easily readable?

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The sponsor wanted to better manage the scope of the project while also improving communication to the business, quality of the deliverables and the teamwork.

I like it.
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araselvan The sponsor wanted to better manage the scope while also improving communication to the business, quality of the deliverables and the teamwork.
I find most managerese opaque to the point of meaninglessness. Below is my take on the meaning.

The sponsor wanted to keep more control on the number of things that were being done. (scope)
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