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0 "Only 13 percent of women consider cardiovascular desease, or CVD, their greatest health risk, but not even cancer claims as many women's lives as CVD" 02br
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00Is this a good sentence gramatically? I kind of feel the meaning of it, but I don't think this is a good sentence. What about the second half of the sentence: 02br
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00"but not even cancer claims as many women's lives as CVD" 02br
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00Is this grammatically right? Can anybody paraphase the whole sentence into a easier ( and more simple) to understand one? 02br
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0 "Only 13 percent of women consider cardiovascular desease, or CVD, as their greatest health risk. " 02br 02br 00To me, this works better 050010id5

— Doodles

  • 0 "Only 13 percent of women consider cardiovascular desease, or CVD, as their greatest health risk.
  • " 02br 02br 00To me, this works better 050010id5
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0 "Only 13 percent of women consider cardiovascular desease, or CVD, as their greatest health risk. Not even cancer claims as many women's lives as CVD does." 02br
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00To me, this works better 050010id5
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0 I think you need to keep it as one sentence as the point is that women do not recognise the risk of CVD. 02br
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00Only 13% of women consider CVD to be the greatest risk to their health, but women are actually more likely to die from this than from cancer. 0-
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