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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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What does motto mean to you?
The motto for Florida University is think, work, and serve and that is a motto that applies to me as well. When a person has a motto he or she is very likely to be a very successful person in life. Also, When a person has a motto he or she has very high goals and standards. Therefore, a person wants to make that motto a very useful tool. If a person has a motto. A motto is like plan because it's something that gets a person started at want he or she wants to accomplish. Therefore, I have three reasons for motto. The three reasons are think, work, and serve.
The first reason I have is think for my motto. Thinking is one of the most important in my motto. If a person can't think he or she can not be successful. For example, if a person is taking a test and just bubbles anything on the paper he is not thinking. Howeve, if he or she is thinking about what it's supposed to be done he or she most likely get a good grade.
The second reson I have in my motto is being able to work and getting the job done. If a person has a job and needs to work to get the job done and doesnt he or she is probably going to get fired. The reason many people don't work is either because they are lazy or see work as a boring thing to do. What they don't understand is without work or a job he or she can't be sucessful. People have to work not only to get the job done, they also have to work to take care of family and support the family.
The final reason I have is serve. Serving is a very tremandous thing to do. When a person serves he or she is doing a very nice thing because it shows how good a charchter you are. I have serve in my motto becuase I want to be known as a good charachter and helpful person. I don;t want to be knowns as a selfish or a uncaring peson. Serving not just help a person with their charachter but it also helps the community. Therefore, the community will always see good thing a person does.
In conclusion, from thinking how to ace a test, working to take care of family and being successful, and serving to help the community these are all something everyone has to do. Therefore I made these my motto and on my way to being a successful person.
The first reason I have is think for my motto. Thinking is one of the most important in my motto. If a person can't think he or she can not be successful. For example, if a person is taking a test and just bubbles anything on the paper he is not thinking. Howeve, if he or she is thinking about what it's supposed to be done he or she most likely get a good grade.
The second reson I have in my motto is being able to work and getting the job done. If a person has a job and needs to work to get the job done and doesnt he or she is probably going to get fired. The reason many people don't work is either because they are lazy or see work as a boring thing to do. What they don't understand is without work or a job he or she can't be sucessful. People have to work not only to get the job done, they also have to work to take care of family and support the family.
The final reason I have is serve. Serving is a very tremandous thing to do. When a person serves he or she is doing a very nice thing because it shows how good a charchter you are. I have serve in my motto becuase I want to be known as a good charachter and helpful person. I don;t want to be knowns as a selfish or a uncaring peson. Serving not just help a person with their charachter but it also helps the community. Therefore, the community will always see good thing a person does.
In conclusion, from thinking how to ace a test, working to take care of family and being successful, and serving to help the community these are all something everyone has to do. Therefore I made these my motto and on my way to being a successful person.
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I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out inappropriate verbiage. Do not use 'he or she' if you must use it more than once or twice . they').
- I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out inappropriate verbiage.
- Do not use 'he or she' if you must use it more than once or twice .
- they').
- Do not keep using 'person' or 'people' over and over, however.
- Find different ways of expressing yourself: The motto for Florida University is think, work, and serve and that is a motto that applies to me as well .
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I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out inappropriate verbiage. Do not use 'he or she' if you must use it more than once or twice. Change to plural ('people...they'). Do not keep using 'person' or 'people' over and over, however. Find different ways of expressing yourself:
The motto for Florida University is think, work, and serve and that is a mo
The motto for Florida University is think, work, and serve and that is a mo
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