Hi, I think one of your strengths definitely is that you give very vivid descriptions. Grammatically speaking, there is some room for improvement though. For example, your first sentence suggests that 'a typical winter day in Seattle' is 'looking out to the horizon', which does not make any sense.
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arodThank you so much. I agree I have lots to improve with my grammar.Please feel free to suggest any other revisions.You're quite welcome.