What do you think of this vert short paragpah?

I have just written this paragraph: Sabrina, a 33 year-mother visited her neighbor Francine carrying tom in his cradle. Tom was only 3 months but full of life and exuberance. Sabrina put the cradle on Francine's bed and soon the two women started chatting.But Francine's cat was already lying on the bed. The presence of the Tom just turned it to an exited playful pet.Black Whiskers hopped a few feet on its hindlimbs towards Tom who was trying to reach his swinging legs. And all of sudden, it jumped over Tom's face and bit his nose while using its hind legs to claw his throat aggressively. Its forelimbs were holding both of his ears when Tom cried so loudly that Black Whiskers scampered out of the room. Sabrina was appalled when she reached over her hysterically crying infant."Oh my Gosh, what a ... cat!" muttered Sabrina. "How can you live with such a .. animal" asked. Francine was upset about the remarks made by her guest on her lovely cat. "Well, you have kids, me I am just a barren woman, so get out of here or I will scratch your face too" yelled Francine. "you want to show off your infant here in my room and I hope Black Whiskers gave you a lesson!"

What do you think of it? thanks