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I learned from UPS that they couldn't delivered my parcel because I owed them £40. I have left a white envelope on your drawer. In the envelope there is £40, please use it to pay the courier when they deliver the parcel today.

  

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I learned from UPS that they couldn't deliver my parcel because I owe them £40. I have left a white envelope in your drawer. In it there is £40 .

  • I learned from UPS that they couldn't deliver my parcel because I owe them £40.
  • I have left a white envelope in your drawer.
  • In it there is £40 .
  • P lease use it to pay the courier when they deliver the parcel today.
  • or UPS has told me they couldn't deliver my parcel because I owe them £40.
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I learned from UPS that they couldn't deliver my parcel because I owe them £40. I have left a white envelope in your drawer. In it there is £40. Please use it to pay the courier when they deliver the parcel today.

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UPS has told me they couldn't deliver my parcel because I owe them £40. I've left a white envelope with £40 in your drawer. Please u

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