What do you think of my essay? "dimensions of love"

There will be a time we will all feel love. You are in love if you have a strong affection or attachment to someone. It could be your family, your friends or someone of the opposite sex. We all feel love for a different reason, it may be because we feel happy with that person, we feel comfortable being with him or her or you trust him or her. But one thing that all persons in love have in common is that they have joy in their hearts. Loving is also the most beautiful thing you will experience.

There are three dimensions of love it is passion, intimacy and commitment. Passion is the powerful emotion that you give when you are with that person you love. Intimacy is the close connection with each other and willing to understand each other. Lastly, commitment is helping each other with their problems and loving unconditionally. With all these dimensions of love, your relationship will last long and happy.