What do you think guys of this motivation letter for a master degree

Dear Sir or Madam,


With this letter I wish hereby wish to apply and state my motivation for entrance to the Master program in International Business at the University of XXX for the 2016/17 academic year.

I appreciate this opportunity to introduce myself at your University and I perceive it as a perfect opportunity to support my application for the Master program in International Business offered by your University. With my educational background and working experience, I strongly believe that I am suitable candidate for the program. I have chosen this University as my first choice because of valuable scholarly resources and well-known reputation of the highly qualified education of the University of XXX, and also because of the partnership between the University Of YYY which

Since I was young I have always had a keen interest in Business and management. I began to subscribe to the periodicals dealing with current events since middle school. At the university, I focused more on business, management and finance and took some elective courses in political economy and economic theory.

After I read carefully the curriculum and the course requirements, I believe that it perfectly matches my research interests and profile. Thanks to the University website, I gained useful information about the University campus and the student life. Bearing in mind the previous I believe I can fit perfectly achieving ideal academic results.

What I can contribute to the program, in addition to my great enthusiasm for the field, is an international perspective from my studies in both countries PPP and QQQ as well as varied communication internships and work experience in ZZZ City, and YYY City. I worked as an Team manager for more than a year in YYY City (as Team Manager at RRR, I have successfully put into practice new initiatives and store layout that have enhanced the client’s experience. Also, I took participation in creating new and highly successful marketing techniques that resulted with more profit to the company), six months at SSS Corp in YYY City also as a warehouse associate, gave me hands-on experience and an increased understanding of delegation methods. In my internships at HHH Marketing and Human resources department of JJJ in ZZZ City, I was able to analyze conduct a market researches, solved transportation problems and create marketing and promotional materials.

Today I perceive that life for me has been a process of conscious evolution. An integral part of this growth has been the value system imbibed in me by my parents, teachers and mentors. As I embark upon a new stage of my life, I believe that a postgraduate study will provide a milestone in my career along with more invaluable experiences that will allow me to become a successful, innovative professional and assist in accomplishing my goals. Ten years from now, I envisage myself as a business development director, multinational manager or international trade customs manager, and why not becoming a CEO of an international organizational.

I am confident that overall opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me an opportunity to gain world class education and help me become an excellent world citizen.

As I understand, this program is very competitive, attracting highly motivated students, but I am convinced that my good and professional experience give me a strong recommendation for a place at it. Therefore I would be honored if you decide to accept my candidateship for Master studies. In the same time I am aware of possible challenges and high investments of effort, I will have to place in order to successfully complete this course.

Thank you in advance for considering my demand.


Sincerely,

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Thank you guys