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0Hi, im new here and i´ve just written some wordings that i would like you to correct for me 05002br
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00Being00 01span00a02span00 01span00good02span00 01span00star02span00 01span00isn02span01span00´t02span00 01span00an02span00 easy 01span00task02span00 but Johnny deep 01span00is02span00 01span00such02span00 01span00a02span00 good one01span00.02span00 01span00He02span00 began his 01span00career02span00 01span00in02span00 00 01span00the02span00 film 01span00a02span00 nightmare 01span00on02span00 01span00elm02span00 01span00street02span00 01span00where02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00showed02span00 01span00his02span00 01span00good02span00 skills 01span00as02span00 01span00an02span00 actor01span00.02span00 01span00However,02span00 01span00if02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00famous02span00 nowadays 01span00is02span00 thanks 01span00to02span00 T00im00 B00urton00 01span00a02span00 01span00prestigious02span00 01span00director02span00 01span00who02span00 01span00has02span00 01span00contracted02span00 01span00johnny02span00 01span00for02span00 some 01span00of02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00best02span00 01span00films02span00 01span00i02span01span00´ve02span00 01span00ever02span00 seen01span00.02span00 The first 01span00one02span00 01span00was02span00 01span00Edward02span00 00Scissorhands00 01span00a02span00 great 01span00film02span00 01span00where02span00 01span00johnny02span00 01span00took02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00role02span00 01span00of02span00 Edward01span00,02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00man02span00 01span00whose02span00 01span00hands02span00 01span00were02span00 01span00replaced02span00 01span00by02span00 scissors01span00.02span00 01span00The02span00 film 01span00was02span00 01span00a02span00 success 01span00as02span00 the 01span00rest02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00the02span00 films they 01span00made02span00 01span00together02span00 01span00but02span00 01span00deep02span00 01span00has02span00 01span00also02span00 01span00taken02span00 01span00part02span00 01span00in02span00 01span00great02span00 01span00films02span00 01span00like02span00 01span00The02span00 pirates 01span00of02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00Caribbean02span00 01span00trilogy02span00 01span00where02span00 01span00he02span00 starred 01span00as02span00 01span00Jack02span00 Sparrow 01span00an02span00 01span00ironic02span00 and silly 01span00pirate.02span00 01span00Deep02span00 01span00told02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00press02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00it´s02span00 01span00his02span00 01span00favorite02span00 character because 01span00he02span00 01span00feels02span00 01span00so02span00 attached 01span00with02span00 him01span00.02span00 01span00Despite02span00 01span00he02span00 has 01span00been02span00 01span00nominated02span00 for the best actor 01span00Oscar02span00 01span00for02span00 several times01span00,02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00hasn02span01span00´t02span00 won 01span00any02span00 01span00but02span00 01span00it´s02span00 01span00obvious02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00his02span00 01span00career02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00brilliant02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00many02span00 01span00people02span00 would 01span00love02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00be02span00 01span00like02span00 01span00him.02span02br
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01span00My02span00 01span00friend02span00 01span00john02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00very02span00 01span00special02span00 01span00guy.I02span00 01span00met02span00 01span00him02span00 01span00some02span00 01span00years02span00 01span00ago02span00 01span00at02span00 school01span00.02span00 01span00At02span00 first 01span00i02span00 01span00didn02span01span00´t02span00 like 01span00him02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00much02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00be02span00 01span00honest02span00 01span00because02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00little02span00 01span00selfish,02span00 01span00he02span00 gets 01span00mad02span00 01span00so02span00 easily 01span00with02span00 01span00people02span00 01span00and02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00always02span00 01span00gets02span00 01span00in02span00 fights 01span00due to02span00 01span00his02span00 01span00bad02span00 01span00attitude.02span00 01span00In other words02span00 01span00we02span00 01span00are02span00 01span00very02span00 01span00different02span00 01span00but02span00 01span00perhaps02span00 01span00thats02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00reason02span00 01span00that02span00 makes 01span00us02span00 01span00be02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00good02span00 01span00friends.02span02br
01span001(”if02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00were02span00 01span00you02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00would02span00 01span00try02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00change”02span00 01span00that´s02span00 01span00what02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00often02span00 01span00tell02span00 01span00him02span00 01span00because02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00consider02span00 that 01span00its02span00 01span00my02span00 task 01span00as02span00 01span00his02span00 01span00friend02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00help02span00 01span00him).02span02br
01span002(I02span00 01span00often02span00 01span00tell02span00 01span00him02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00change02span00 01span00because02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00can´t02span00 01span00keep02span00 01span00acting02span00 01span00like02span00 01span00that02span00 but 01span00he02span00 01span00doesn02span01span00´t02span00 01span00listen02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00me)02span00 01span00.02span00 01span00But02span00 01span00in the end02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00think02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00has02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00good02span00 01span00heart02span00 01span00and02span00 01span00that02span00 one 01span00day,02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00will02span00 01span00realise02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00must02span00 01span00change.02span02br
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01span00My02span00 01span00favorite02span00 01span00film02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00Matrix02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00sci-fi02span00 01span00film02span00 that 01span00takes02span00 01span00part02span00 01span00in02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00very02span00 01span00changed02span00 01span00earth02span00 01span00where02span00 some 01span00scientist02span00 01span00created02span00 01span00an02span00 01span00army02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00machines.02span00 01span00They02span00 01span00made02span00 01span00them02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00intelligent02span00 that they 01span00became02span00 01span00self-sufficient02span00 01span00and02span00 01span00ruled02span00 01span00over02span00 01span00humanity.02span00 01span00The02span00 01span00machines02span00 01span00soon02span00 01span00realised02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00they02span00 01span00needed02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00point02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00energy02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00live.02span00 01span00After02span00 01span00some02span00 01span00years02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00research02span00 01span00they02span00 finally 01span00discovered02span00 that 01span00humans02span00 01span00were02span00 01span00such02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00good02span00 01span00point02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00energy,02span00 01span00so02span00 01span00they02span00 decided 01span00to02span00 01span00put02span00 01span00them02span00 01span00all02span00 01span00inside02span00 01span00cabinets02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00were02span00 01span00connected02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00a02span00 virtual world allowing 01span00the02span00 01span00machines02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00drain02span00 01span00their02span00 energy 01span00while02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00poor02span00 01span00people02span00 01span00were02span00 unaware 01span00about02span00 01span00what02span00 01span00was02span00 01span00really02span00 01span00happening02span00 01span00there.02span00 01span00Here02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00where02span00 01span00Neo02span00 01span00,the02span00 01span00main02span00 01span00starrier02span00 01span00of02span00 the film01span00,02span00 01span00joins02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00action02span00 and 01span00tries02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00defeat02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00machines02span00 01span00and02span00 make 01span00people02span00 01span00discover02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00truth.02span00 01span00I02span00 01span00would02span00 01span00love02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00tell02span00 01span00more02span00 01span00about02span00 01span00this02span00 01span00film02span00 01span00but02span00 01span00its02span00 story 01span00doesn02span01span00´t02span00 01span00deserve02span00 01span00to02span00 01span00be02span00 spoiled this 01span00way.02span02br
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01span00My02span00 mother 01span00is02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00crucial02span00 part 01span00of02span00 01span00my02span00 life01span00.02span00 01span00I02span00 01span00owe02span00 01span00her02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00lot02span00 01span00since02span00 thanks 01span00to02span00 01span00her,02span00 01span00I'm02span00 01span00here02span00 01span00at02span00 01span00this02span00 01span00world.02span00 Despite 01span00in02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00fact02span00 she has 01span00defects02span00 01span00as02span00 01span00the02span00 01span00rest02span00 01span00of02span00 01span00human02span00 beings01span00,02span00 01span00I02span00 01span00believe02span00 she 01span00has02span00 01span00been02span00 01span00a02span00 01span00great02span00 01span00mother02span00 because 01span00if02span00 01span00he02span00 01span00hadn02span01span00´t02span00 been 01span00a02span00 good 01span00one02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00wouldn't02span01span00´t02span00 have become what 01span00I02span00 01span00am02span00 nowadays01span00.02span00 01span00Another thing02span00 01span00i02span00 01span00like02span00 about 01span00my02span00 01span00mother02span00 01span00is02span00 01span00that02span00 01span00she02span00 looks 01span00younger02span00 than she really 01span00is02span00 and its very 01span00funny02span00 when people 01span00asks02span00 01span00me02span00 01span00if02span00 she 01span00is02span00 01span00my02span00 01span00aunt.02span00 01span00So02span00 01span00as02span00 you 01span00can02span00 see 01span00I'm02span00 very proud 01span00of02span00 01span00her02span00 and 01span00i02span00 01span00wouldn02span01span00´t02span00 01span00be02span00 able 01span00to02span00 live without 01span00her02span02br
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00Thanks a lot for your time!!!! 010id1