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Austere125rivers Posted 15 years ago
They poured fuel oil on the animal’s back before setting fire and started to laugh. The video shows the animal turning around itself several times, in a hopeless attempt to stop the deadly fire and starts running at high speed with no aim.
The three boys were never identified nor were they punished yet.
Donkeys are hard-working animals, tireless humans’ obeisant. They never complain like us, because cannot speak to defend themselves, and ask to be free from that inhuman slavery.
Millions of donkeys are mistreated and abused during their honorable duties around the world, they are not fed well, and they never vacation or retire, most of them die of hunger, malnutrition and hardship .
When its owner is relaxing at home, the animal is used by other fresh men. Usually, donkeys are beaten and their cart overloaded with tons of heavy good.
You can see my article with pics.
http://only-healthy-ideas.blogspot.com/2011/06/donkeys-ordeal.html
Thank you a lot.
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thank a lot you guys.Donkeys' ordeal
Three young Algerian males set fire on a poor innocent donkey, burning it alive, last month. After adding some patriotic songs to it, to covert the painful moaning of the domestic ass, the three men put the video online in Youtube and Facebook.They poured fuel oil on the animal’s back before setting fire and started to laugh. The video shows the animal turning around itself several times, in a hopeless attempt to stop the deadly fire and starts running at high speed with no aim.
The three boys were never identified nor were they punished yet.
Donkeys are hard-working animals, tireless humans’ obeisant. They never complain like us, because cannot speak to defend themselves, and ask to be free from that inhuman slavery.
Millions of donkeys are mistreated and abused during their honorable duties around the world, they are not fed well, and they never vacation or retire, most of them die of hunger, malnutrition and hardship .
When its owner is relaxing at home, the animal is used by other fresh men. Usually, donkeys are beaten and their cart overloaded with tons of heavy good.
You can see my article with pics.
http://only-healthy-ideas.blogspot.com/2011/06/donkeys-ordeal.html
Thank you a lot.
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Hi austere 123, Some changes have been made. Some ideas have been rephrased. In case you think they are not needed please remove them.
- Hi austere 123, Some changes have been made.
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- _________________________________________________________________________________________ Donkeys' ordeal Three young Algerian males burnt a poor innocent donkey last month.
- After adding some patriotic songs, with the intention of silencing the painful moaning of the domestic ***, the three men put the video online in Youtube and Facebook.
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Hi austere 123,
Some changes have been made. Some ideas have been rephrased. In case you think they are not needed please remove them.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Donkeys' ordeal
Three young Algerian males burnt a poor innocent donkey last month. After adding some patriotic songs, with the intenti
Some changes have been made. Some ideas have been rephrased. In case you think they are not needed please remove them.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Donkeys' ordeal
Three young Algerian males burnt a poor innocent donkey last month. After adding some patriotic songs, with the intenti
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Hi austere 123,
Some changes have been made. Some ideas have been rephrased. In case you think they are not needed please remove them.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Donkeys' ordeal
Three young Algerian males burnt a poor innocent donkey last month. After adding some patriotic songs, with the intenti
Some changes have been made. Some ideas have been rephrased. In case you think they are not needed please remove them.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Donkeys' ordeal
Three young Algerian males burnt a poor innocent donkey last month. After adding some patriotic songs, with the intenti
00
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