What do you think?

I wanna know what everyone thinks of this song I wrote. Now I know it probally lacks good grammer and poor... whatever
I'm not sure of the meaning, or why the words say what they do. Can you just look at the song and let me know what you think? Thanks!



"Let me go"
©L.T.P 2004


Let me go, Hold me close, Bring me around so I can see your face,

Light this fire in me, help me to chase away the enemy.

I wont be scared by you, I can be lifted up to praise

I will be loved by you...

~Chorus~

I wan't to be loved by you

If you cared you would love me too

Please say no when the time is now

If you cared you would leave somehow

~Verse 2~

To see this life, to understand.

Would it change you if I was a better man?

Would you see, a better me, I cannot be everything that you want me too be.

I won't be scared by you, you pick me up as I fall you my knees

I will be loved by you

~Chorus~


~Post-Chorus~

I feel free, let me go
I feel free, let me go