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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
What do you thing of my Application letter?
Can anybody give me some more tips ? THX
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Dear Miss Koo,
In reply to your advertisement on the internet, I wish to apply for the job of Instructor at your university. I look forward to putting my knowledge and experience into practice in the your school system
I see from your advertisement that you are looking for people with a good knowledge of and experience with computers and teaching. I have more than 5 years experience in the IT and 4 years in teaching.
I have a working knowledge of programming and teaching. I succeeded in making some programmes for Microsoft and took the networks of Harvard for my account.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Youth Faithfully
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Dear Miss Koo,
In reply to your advertisement on the internet, I wish to apply for the job of Instructor at your university. I look forward to putting my knowledge and experience into practice in the your school system
I see from your advertisement that you are looking for people with a good knowledge of and experience with computers and teaching. I have more than 5 years experience in the IT and 4 years in teaching.
I have a working knowledge of programming and teaching. I succeeded in making some programmes for Microsoft and took the networks of Harvard for my account.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Youth Faithfully
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Dear Miss Koo Re: Instructor position I wish to apply for the above position as advertised with the university. Professionally, I have worked within the Information Technology sector for more than five years, including four years of teaching computer students. During this time I developed computer programs for the Microsoft Corporation as well as being the computer administrator responsible for network at Harvard University.
- Dear Miss Koo Re: Instructor position I wish to apply for the above position as advertised with the university.
- Professionally, I have worked within the Information Technology sector for more than five years, including four years of teaching computer students.
- During this time I developed computer programs for the Microsoft Corporation as well as being the computer administrator responsible for network at Harvard University.
- My resume will attest to the fact that I am suitably qualified and inconjunction with my extensive industry knowledge and experience for which the above position is seeking, I believe that I am a suitable candidate for consideration as I meet the criteria.
- I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for your time in reading my application and should you have any questions or queries my contact details are enlosed with my resume.
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Dear Miss Koo
Re: Instructor positionI wish to apply for the above position as advertised with the university.
Professionally, I have worked within the Information Technology sector for more than five years, including four years of teaching computer students.
During this time I developed computer programs for the Microsoft Corporation as well as being the compu
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