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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

What do you change on sentese below

We have already received the grey cotton fabric , and the quality is very good. Unfortunately we do not, as yet, have a new import date as the fluctuations in the exchange rate mean that the cost and taxes have risen significantly.
  

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I'd do this: We have received the grey cotton fabric, and the quality is very good. Unfortunately , we do not as yet have a new import date , because the fluctuations in the exchange rate mean that the cost and duty have risen significantly.

— Mister Micawber

  • I'd do this: We have received the grey cotton fabric, and the quality is very good.
  • Unfortunately , we do not as yet have a new import date , because the fluctuations in the exchange rate mean that the cost and duty have risen significantly.
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I'd do this:

We have received the grey cotton fabric, and the quality is very good. Unfortunately, we do not as yet have a new import date, because the fluctuations in the exchange rate mean that the cost and duty have risen significantly.
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I want to show that "the cost abd duty have risen because of the fluctuations in the exchange"

it shows?
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