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B3foul Posted 19 years ago

what do u think of my poem ?

1font01i01b00 You have been gone for a while02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 but I still see your smile02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 I still fear your fire02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 I saw the eyes of the dreamy sky02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 left alone,who know why?02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 I dared,dared to love,to adore02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 to the limits of your heart's shore02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 you have been gone for a while02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 but I still see your smile02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 I still fear your fire02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 we could not help but to break up02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 it was hard , for you was fine02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 I guess it s time to wake up02b02i02font02br
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01font01i01b00 who I m kidding ?! you were never mine02b02i02font02br
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0Your poem is good but I have always been afraid of such lovers.050010id2
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1font01b00Good poem 05002b02font02br
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01font01b00keep on trucking[Y]02b02font010id2
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0i enjoyed your poem!02br
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