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Kedra Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance

What do native speakers think of this marketing text style? Thank you!

1i00The below passage is an abstract from the article I am writing. The article is dedicated to the advantages of being an owner of the small vacation rental web site instead of a large international vacation rental portal. I am interested very much in its style, does it sound English? I will appreciate if someone could correct me both in style and grammar. Thank you very much in advance.02i02br
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01font00Small vacation rental web site, dedicated to one specific country or region, shows more professionalism and generates more trust if it offers property owners and guests to sign rental agreements. Being the owner of large vacation rental web site you have owners from different countries with different local laws. It is hard to control all the deals between property owners and tenants in this case.02font02br
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01font00If you own the web site, dedicated to one region, you can spend some time to compose a legal document, which would be valid for this very region and applicable for your owners-guests. Such rental agreement should describe the most likely disputes, which can arise between an owner and a guest: furniture damage, insurance, guest-owner responsibilities, abandonment, payment schedule, etc. People feel more comfortable when their financial deals are backed up by legal force. 00 00 02font0-
  

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1b 01font 00Document your financial relationships 02font 02b 02br 02br 01font 01b 00Operators of02b 00 large vacation rental 01b 00websites02b 00 have owners from different countries with different local laws01b 00, so it02b 00 is hard to control all the 01b 00agreements/negotiations02b 00 between property owners and01b 00 tenants, but a02b 02font 01font 01b 00 small02b 00 vacation rental 01b 00website02b 00 01b 00dedicated02b 00 to one specific country or01b 00 region shows02b 00 more professionalism and generates more trust if 01u 00it offers01b 00 rental agreements prepared on behalf of 02b 00property owners and guests02u 00 [01i 00I guess that is your meaning02i 00]. 02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00If you 01b 00operate02b 00 01b 00a02b 00 website dedicated to one region, you 01b 00can compose02b 00 legal 01b 00documents valid for your region and appropiate for your owners and guests02b 00. Such rental 01b 00agreements02b 00 should describe the most likely 01b 00disputes that 02b 00can arise between 01b 00owner and guest:02b 00 furniture 01b 00and fixture02b 00 damage, insurance, guest 01b 00and02b 00 owner responsibilities, abandonment, payment schedule, etc.

  • 1b 01font 00Document your financial relationships 02font 02b 02br 02br 01font 01b 00Operators of02b 00 large vacation rental 01b 00websites02b 00 have owners from different countries with different local laws01b 00, so it02b 00 is hard to control all the 01b 00agreements/negotiations02b 00 between property owners and01b 00 tenants, but a02b 02font 01font 01b 00 small02b 00 vacation rental 01b 00website02b 00 01b 00dedicated02b 00 to one specific country or01b 00 region shows02b 00 more professionalism and generates more trust if 01u 00it offers01b 00 rental agreements prepared on behalf of 02b 00property owners and guests02u 00 [01i 00I guess that is your meaning02i 00].
  • 02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00If you 01b 00operate02b 00 01b 00a02b 00 website dedicated to one region, you 01b 00can compose02b 00 legal 01b 00documents valid for your region and appropiate for your owners and guests02b 00.
  • Such rental 01b 00agreements02b 00 should describe the most likely 01b 00disputes that 02b 00can arise between 01b 00owner and guest:02b 00 furniture 01b 00and fixture02b 00 damage, insurance, guest 01b 00and02b 00 owner responsibilities, abandonment, payment schedule, etc.
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01font01b00Operators of02b00 large vacation rental 01b00websites02b00 have owners from different countries with different local laws01b00, so it02b00 is hard to contro
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0 Hi Mister Micawber, wow, you changed the first paragraph upside down! I've never thought it might be changed that much. Thank you very much for your assistance! 0-

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