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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
What do I put first?
I just started writing in college. Which comes first? Does it even matter?
When you are clocked in at work, you should be a hard worker for the advantages of yourself and your colleagues.
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When you are clocked in at work, you should be a hard worker for the advantages of your colleagues and yourself.
When you are clocked in at work, you should be a hard worker for the advantages of yourself and your colleagues.
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When you are clocked in at work, you should be a hard worker for the advantages of your colleagues and yourself.
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Possessive 'of' + pronoun is not good style in any case. And your sentence has other problems. I suggest: When you are clocked in, hard work is to your and your colleagues' advantage.
- Possessive 'of' + pronoun is not good style in any case.
- And your sentence has other problems.
- I suggest: When you are clocked in, hard work is to your and your colleagues' advantage.
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Possessive 'of' + pronoun is not good style in any case. And your sentence has other problems. I suggest:
When you are clocked in, hard work is to your and your colleagues' advantage.
When you are clocked in, hard work is to your and your colleagues' advantage.
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