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Saad20 Posted 22 years ago
What can I do to make her love me
Hello everybody, let share with you this poetry, it was the first i wrote to a girl (became my wife later), when I met her:
What can I do to make her love me (Sept, 07th, 1989)
Shall I fly the vast sky?
Shall I live or shall I die?
Is it possible to let her come near me?
Is it possible to let her touch me?
Can my dreams be fulfilled one day?
And can I then put the golden bay?
What can I do to make her see?
My sorrow, my tears and my weep?
Is there anyone who can understand me?
One day I’ll tell the whole world,
That’s the only girl,
That had pleased to me.
What can I do to make her love me (Sept, 07th, 1989)
Shall I fly the vast sky?
Shall I live or shall I die?
Is it possible to let her come near me?
Is it possible to let her touch me?
Can my dreams be fulfilled one day?
And can I then put the golden bay?
What can I do to make her see?
My sorrow, my tears and my weep?
Is there anyone who can understand me?
One day I’ll tell the whole world,
That’s the only girl,
That had pleased to me.
Top answer
This is a great way to express your love to a girl. Its a good poem.
- This is a great way to express your love to a girl.
- Its a good poem.
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This is a great way to express your love to a girl. Your wife is lucky indeed!Its a good poem.
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saad20Hello everybody, let share with you this poetry, it was the first i wrote to a girl (became my wife later), when I met her:
Wow... Did you manage to give it to her? What was her reaction?
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